MORE WHITE SPACE! How to Pare Down Your Prose and Get Your Scripts Noticed

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Event Date: Saturday, July 18, 2015 || Speaker: Bill Lundy  || Check-in: 12:30 pm ||

Producers, development execs, agents and managers are busy people, reading literally dozens of scripts per week. Needless to say, the less they have to read in a particular script, the better. But one of the most common mistakes emerging writers make is OVERWRITING, leading to their scripts getting ignored or skimmed and tossed into the “Pass” pile. In this class, you’ll learn how to cut down your prose and put exactly what you need on the page to get your story across – leaving lots of white space, which makes those people VERY happy!


**The deadline has passed and REGISTRATION is now CLOSED for this event. Please view our calendar for upcoming events.
Check-in begins at 12:30 pm.
Event starts at 1:00 pm. 

No Refunds. No Credits.


Bill-Lundy BILL LUNDY has written two highly-rated original films for SyFy, Silent Warnings and Alien Siege, sold stories to Star Trek: Voyager, and optioned over a dozen scripts. Bill was Chairman of the Scriptwriters Network from 1997-2004, and currently serves on their board as Chairman Emeritus. A top script consultant and teacher known as “The Log Line Doctor,” Bill has taught classes or moderated panels at numerous industry events, and has contributed to several popular screenwriting books, including “The 60-Second Pitch,” “Q&A: The Working Screenwriter” and “Now Write! Screenwriting.” Among other projects, he recently completed his first novel and is currently developing a TV pilot with a high-profile production company.


Join us on the Third Saturday every month at:


CBS Studio Center
4024 Radford Avenue
Studio City, CA 91604

Free Parking — Enter the CBS lot at the main gate & inform security you are there for the Scriptwriters Network event.

You’ll be asked for your government issued photo ID, and then given directions to the meeting location. You may park in any available space on the lot (unless they direct you to a parking structure during special events).

As this is a professional event, we ask that you please arrive prior to the event start time.

Meeting Timeframe: 1:00 pm to approximately 3:00 pm

Please remember to bring a picture ID and your SWN Membership Card!

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