May 2026 – Scene Writing & Structure Challenge – 40th Anniversary Series

 

 


 

May 2026

Scene Writing & Structure Challenge Honorees

 

The following writers were selected for recognition in

Scriptwriters Network’s May 2026 Scene Writing & Structure Challenge,

part of our 40 Years, 12 Months, 12 Ways We Give Back celebration.

 

Explore each writer’s profile, biography,

and recognized submission below.

 


 

🏆 Grand Prize Winners   

Frank McEnaney & Gillian (Gil Lian)

 


 

Project Title: Missus Shakespeare

Bio:

Frank McEnaney & Gillian (Gil Lian), are a couple of Canadians who were also a couple. Frank began as a playwright and had Equity-produced plays on the main stages of the Vancouver Playhouse, Theater Aquarius, Factory Theater Lab, and Theater Passe Muraille. Gillian began as a young adult author and has had six novels published (under the pseudonym Mitzi Dale) by Groundwood Books and Nimbus in Canada, Kinderjury in the Netherlands, Puffin in the UK and Delacorte in the US.

They collaborated at close range on Luminosity (Random House, Canada, Vintage), Sea-Change (Mosaic Press, Ontario) and Xtro & Julie (New Ideas Festival, Toronto). In 2008 they turned their hands to writing filmscripts and honed their skills by entering the PAGE Awards contest. They have four comedy scripts on InkTip: the contained rom-com, MISSUS SHAKESPEARE (or alt title); the para-normal rom-com, DREAM ON; the ensemble rom-com, STRANGE THINGS DONE; and the family comedy, ALL HAPPY FAMILIES. All four scripts were Selections of the UK Film Festival Scriptwriting Competition 2024/25.

Submission:

OPENING SCENE FOR MRS. SHAKESPEARE
CRAWL:
                                     ANNE SHAKESPEARE’S YOUNG HUSBAND,
                                     AN AMBITIOUS PLAYWRIGHT, IS HOME
                                     IN STRATFORD FOR A BRIEF VISIT
                                     BEFORE THE LONDON THEATER SEASON
                                     RESUMES. THE YEAR IS 1595.

INT. BEDROOM – PREDAWN
 
ANNE(37) and WILL SHAKESPEARE (29) lie in bed. She sleeps
on his chest. He’s awake. She rolls away, taking the cover.
He grabs and pulls his share over himself. He rolls in the
opposite direction taking the cover. In her sleep, she
pulls the cover. They each pull back and forth.

He’s awake, so he wins.

Ironically, she sleeps on while he tosses and turns. He
scrunches up his pillow.

Silence.

Anne goes deeper and deeper into sleep. She murmurs softly.
She hugs herself in her sleep. Will grows more and more
tense.

Outside, a DONKEY brays, softly.

                            DONKEY (O.S.)
                 Hee haw. Hee haw.

Anne’s breathing deepens. Donkey brays again.

                            DONKEY (O.S.) (CONT’D)
                 Hee haw.

Anne moans almost inaudibly. She rolls over onto her back.
She is deeply, pleasurably asleep now and Will is
maddeningly awake, eyes wide open. The donkey brays louder.

Anne moans. Will listens. She moans again; from his tight
little bundle, he turns to look at her.

                             DONKEY (O.S.) (CONT’D)
                 (louder still)
               Hee haw. Hee haw. Hee haw.

Anne begins to gently undulate. Will scrunches down and
throws his arm over his exposed ear. As Anne moves and
moans, the donkey’s braying becomes louder. Anne is
excited. The donkey is loud. Finally, Will throws himself
on his stomach and lifts the pillow and mashes it over his
head and ears.

Silence.

Will removes the pillow from his head. He listens. He rolls
over onto his side. Then onto his back. Anne is fast asleep
beside him.

Dawn.

A cock CROWS.

Will throws his feet over the edge of the bed. He tugs on
britches then pulls off his nightshirt. He puts on a
billowy white shirt and, without a backward glance, climbs
up the steep, narrow stairs to the

GABLED LOFT

ducking to avoid a low beam as he enters.

The loft is small and contains a desk holding a bottle of
ink and quill pen and paper. On a nearby reading stand
rests an enormous book: HOLINSHED’S CHRONICLES. He opens it
and reads by the gray light of a small window.

BEDROOM

As the light grows brighter, Anne wakes up. She rolls over
to snuggle spoons with Will. She makes exploring pats with
her hand and it becomes increasingly apparent, though her
eyes are still closed, that he isn’t there.

GABLED LOFT

Will lifts his quill, dips it in the inkwell and starts
writing.

Scritch, scritch, scritch.

BEDROOM

Anne listens. In the morning stillness she hears the
scritch, scritch, scritch of Will’s quill pen. She groans.
She rolls back to her original position on her side of the
bed. As the scritching becomes more intense, she parallels
Will during the night. Arm over ear, pillow over head,
rolling onto tummy.

END.

 


 

 

🌟 Honorable Mention       

Diana Stout

 


 

Project Title: Introduction of Vince

Bio:

Diana Stout is a multifaceted award-winner, screenwriter, author, blogger, writing coach, former English professor of writing classes, and an intuitive who travels with a crowd—characters clamoring their story be next and those who have crossed to the other side. Her ability to move seamlessly between creative and professional writing reflects both her versatility and deep understanding of the written word.

Among her proudest accomplishments is her novel Grendel’s Mother, an ambitious project that re-imagines a classic tale through a compelling new lens. The book showcases her skill at blending literary craft with emotional depth—a hallmark of her writing across all genres.

Submission:

EXT. CIRCUS – SMALL TOWN NEAR NEW YORK CITY – SUMMER – DAY

Montage of activity: setting up tent, handlers leading animals, feeding, watered, and washed. Various actors in costume.

Horses isolated from activity, housed in large tent. Nervous activity due to approaching handler, SOLLIE ROSSINI, slight build, wiry but strong. Doesn’t pet animals or make soothing noises. Growls instead. Staggers, still somewhat drunk from last night. Looks older than his 35 years.

VINCE ROSSINI, nine, small and thin for his age, struggles to move a bale of hay.

SOLLIE

Vince, get over here with that bridle.

Vince turns. Black eye. Looks frantic. Glances at Sollie. Gaze searches for bridle. Panic.

SOLLIE

What’s taking you so long, boy?

VINCE

(soft pleading-like)

It’s not here, Dad.

Sollie drops reins in his hand and is at Vince’s side in three steps. Vince cowers. Sollie backhands him hard.

SOLLIE

Do I have to do everything?

Sollie snatches the bridle out of sight, atop a huge pile of hay that’s taller than Vince. Sollie glares at Vince.

Vince shrinks, sniffs back any tears.

SOLLIE

Stop that balling! Now. You’re a man. Act like one.

Sollie hits him again. This time, Vince glares back.

LOUIS (O.S.)

Sollie.

Sollie freezes, spins around. Surprised. LOUIS MANITAVI, a big dark beefy man, stands in the tent’s doorway.

Sollie’s demeanor changes. He smiles but it’s not genuine. Nervous.

SOLLIE

Come to see the circus, Louis?

LOUIS

Among other things.

He sees Vince.

LOUIS

Come here, kid.

Vince approaches cautiously. Doesn’t look Louis in the eye. Stands in front of Louis, who cups Vince’s chin, forcing Vince to look up.

LOUIS

That’s quite a shiner. Hope the other guy looks worse.

VINCE

No, sir.

LOUIS

Too bad.

Louis reaches a hand into his pants pocket and pulls out a Tootsie Roll sucker.

LOUIS

Here. Now scram.

Vince takes the sucker, turns and disappears behind stacked bales of hay. Stops, leans against hay, and unwraps the sucker. He hears Sollie and Louis talk.

SOLLIE (O.S.)

I don’t have it, Louis.

LOUIS (O.S.)

Not here for your excuses, Sollie. Too bad you can’t bet on the horses as well as you care for them.

Vince, sucker in his mouth, peeks around the corner.

SOLLIE

I just need one more chance. Tell the boss I’ve got a new insider. I’ll have the money tomorrow.

LOUIS

That’s what you said yesterday and the day before. He’s tired of your promises.

He takes out a gun with a silencer, shoots Sollie in the head. Sollie collapses to the ground.

Vince jerks. Blinks.

His expression changes. Relief. He turns back around, resumes leaning against the bales, enjoying the sucker.

A shadow falls over him. Vince jumps so he’s standing. Sees gun at Louis’ side, the barrel pointing down. Panic flits across his face, but then disappears. He looks up at Louis.

VINCE

Are you going to kill me too?

LOUIS

Why shouldn’t I? You’ve got his seed.

VINCE

I can make your boss money.

Louis laughs.

LOUIS

How? You’re just a kid.

VINCE

I know horses.

LOUIS

That a fact?

(pause)

Boss has quite a few horses. Likes to bet on ’em, too. Sollie always said he knew how to pick a winner.

VINCE

(glancing at his dead father)

Doesn’t look like much of a winner to me. I told him to pick the other horse.

LOUIS

And, which one was that?

VINCE

The one that won.

He licks the sucker.

Louis snorts.

LOUIS

I like your style, kid.

Louis considers the boy carefully.

LOUIS

Wanna make some money?

VINCE

Sure.

LOUIS

Doing anything boss tells you?

VINCE

Does he hit kids?

LOUIS

Nah. He just shoots them.

Louis grins, ruffles Vince’s hair.

Vince follows Louis and pauses at father’s body. Without any expression on Vince’s face, he tosses the sucker to the ground. It lands in front of Sollie’s open eyes. Then Vince kicks him and follows Louis.

END.

 


 

🌟 Honorable Mention        

Annette Marie Barsellotti

 


 

Project Title: Paulina

Bio:
Annette Marie Barsellotti writes:

“I started writing (not so great) scripts when I was 12. I can’t tell you why; I just had to type the dialogue on the page and see where it would take me. I am amazed by today’s screenwriters and just how compelling they can make a story.

As an actress and a writer, it is always my goal to make the reader or audience feel something. The truth of a scene is found in that compelling moment, and without it, all is lost. I have miles to go, but hopefully I can create many more characters in search of their truth.”

Submission:

INT. COURTROOM – DAY

PAULINA TASSIO, 38, sits in the chair, nervous, twisting her fingers. HUGH SAGER, 53, the dark suited, “dutiful” lawyer look, stands before her, his grooming exemplary.

The MEMBERS OF THE JURY watch her twist away.  A few of them smile.  A few look at her with suspicious eyes.  The rest begin to twist their own fingers.

SAGER
The last time you saw your friend was that evening, at what time?

PAULINA
We had dinner, went to her apartment, afterwards, around 7:00.  She had baked a dessert for me.

SAGER
Really?  What kind?

LOLA ZUBERK, 48, stands up.  A “good looker” and she knows it.  But, it doesn’t get in the way of her doing her job.

LOLA
Your Honor, really.  We are not here to discuss dessert.

The JUDGE, 70, classy sideburns that don’t quite match the color of his robe, agrees.

JUDGE
Mr. Sager, let’s move on.

SAGER
Of course, your Honor.  After your delicious dessert, then what happened?

Paulina looks around the room, at all the skeptical faces.

PAULINA
We talked for awhile, then I left.

SAGER
You talked about what?

PAULINA
She was going to leave Dustin.  It wasn’t working out.

SAGER
Dustin, being her “present” boyfriend?

Lola stands up, again.

LOLA
Objection, your Honor.  Present is irrelevant.

SAGER
Your Honor, I’m merely trying to be clear about who Dustin is.

LOLA
You’re trying to lead the jury to believe that she, as well as Paulina, used questionable judgment in their relationships.

SAGER
Wow, all that.  You said it, not me.

The judge frowns at both of them, looks at his watch.

JUDGE
Cat and mouse games, Mr. Sager.  She had a boyfriend.  That is not a crime.  Continue.

Sager smiles across the aisle at Lola.

SAGER
Yes, of course.  Paulina, you  discussed Dustin, and then you left.

PAULINA
Yes.

SAGER
At 3:00 in the morning, Ms. Empey’s  body was found in the park across the street from her apartment.  Not a mark on her, and yet she was dead.  Do you know anything about that?

Lola approaches the judge, furious.

LOLA
Your Honor, the Prosecutor has just accused my client of murder, without any evidence whatsoever.

SAGER
Your Honor, I simply said, “Do you know anything about that?”

JUDGE
That is what he said.  I’ll allow it.  Careful, Mr. Sager, careful.

Lola sits down, crosses her legs, glares at Sager.

SAGER
When did you receive the call from her mother?

PAULINA
I…I think it was the next morning.

SAGER
You don’t know?

PAULINA
I overslept.  I was tired.

SAGER
Your friend had just died, and you were sleeping.

Lola rises, thinks twice, sits down.

JUDGE
Mr. Sager, I gave you an inch, not a foot.

SAGER
Yes, your Honor.  I apologize.

Sager turns back to Paulina.  His eyes are softer, this time.

SAGER
Ms. Tassio, I am sorry for your loss.  Please tell the court what you did after you left her apartment.

PAULINA
I went home.  I watched a little television and fell asleep on the couch. The next day, I got the call from her mother.  She was hysterical, and my friend was — dead.

A collective sigh from the jury.  Sager looks at them, nods, then opens a file, examines the contents.

SAGER
Your Honor, these documents have been obtained from the insurance company that handled Ms. Empey’s death.

The judge views the documents, looks at Paulina, then hands them back to Sager.

SAGER
Ms. Tassio, I just have a few more questions.

JUDGE
Good, because after that, we are going to adjourn for the day.  Be brief, Mr. Sager.

Sager approaches Paulina.  He is lost in thought.

SAGER
Ms. Tassio,
(pauses)
you suffer from a rare blood disorder, do you not?

PAULINA
(hesitates)
Yes.

SAGER
And you are currently receiving treatments — to enhance recovery?

PAULINA
Yes.

SAGER
I would imagine that these treatments can become very expensive.

PAULINA
At times.

SAGER
Do you have health insurance?

The jurors squirm in their chairs, glance at each other.

PAULINA
No.

SAGER
How do you pay for these treatments, Ms. Tassio?

Arms extended across the table, Lola leans forward.

LOLA
Your Honor, this is a private matter between Ms. Tassio and her doctor. It really doesn’t concern…

JUDGE
(snaps gently)
Overruled.  I am interested to know the answer to this question.

SAGER
Do you make payments?

PAULINA
I do.

SAGER
Are you in debt, because of these payments?

Lola bows her head, while Paulina remains silent.

SAGER
I’ll re-phrase.  Do you have help?  Does your family, or your company help with these payments?

Paulina shakes her head, begins to cry.

PAULINA
No.

SAGER
You are a full-time employee?

PAULINA
I am a contract employee.

SAGER
So you do not receive benefits?

PAULINA
No.

Lola approaches the bench, points at Sager.

LOLA
Your Honor, this is ridiculous.  The Prosecutor seems to be more interested in Ms. Tassio’s company benefits.  We are way off base.

JUDGE
Mr. Sager, you better make a connection quickly.  My gavel is about to drop.

Sager steps up to Paulina.  His soft eyes have suddenly hardened.

SAGER
Ms. Tassio, isn’t it true that nine months prior to her death, Ms. Empey turned everything over to you?

PAULINA
I don’t know what you mean.

SAGER
Ms. Tassio, I think you do.  You became the primary beneficiary to her assets.

Paulina turns to the jury, with pleading eyes.

PAULINA
I didn’t…I don’t know anything about that.

SAGER
(cuts her off)
In fact, we are not talking “primary.”  We are talking, “only” beneficiary.

LOUD GASP from the room.  The jury members quickly re-position themselves in their chairs, all ears full-front.

SAGER
Just — you.

Another loud gasp, heads shaking in disapproval.

SAGER
Can you explain that, Ms. Tassio?

PAULINA
I swear, I didn’t know.

SAGER
Toxicology report says her body was pumped full of drugs.

PAULINA
No…no, she didn’t believe in drugs.

SAGER
Somebody did.  Perhaps the person who killed her.

Sager grips the rail before the jurors.

SAGER
And then there is the Affidavit of Heirship.  Not related to the deceased, and yet, there it is. Paulina’s signature to obtain property inherited by Ms. Empey.

He pivots, confidently “dances” before the jurors.

SAGER
“What webs we weave, when we practice to deceive.”

The gavel drops.

JUDGE
Speculation can be dangerous.  We are dealing with people’s lives, here.  Ms. Zuberk and Mr. Sager, you are strongly advised to make damn sure you remember that.

The judge smooths his sideburns, as he leaves the room.  Sager closes his valise, struts out, pushing through the double doors.

Lola stares at Sager.

LOLA
(under her breath)
I can’t believe I slept with that jerk.
 
END.
 
 

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